Friday, February 26, 2016

I am Lucky
We are lucky.

      If we compare ourselves to lottery winners, we might not appear to be lucky. Certainly, most of us might not win the lottery once, not even a raffle ticket. However, if we compare our life with those who live in developing countries, without a clean source of water and basic necessities. We are definitely lucky.

      Through juxtaposition, our values and gains can be highlighted with others’. In a similar way, Siegfried Sassoon utilizes juxtaposition to criticize the contrast treatment and the outcomes between the privileged generals and the ordinary soldiers in a war.

       In the beginning of the poem, the speaker reveals that he had “speed glum [soldiers] up the line of death” (3). Following this line, the speaker reveals that the authority figure stays in the best hotel while the soldier fought in the war. The situation between the soldier and the authority figure is extremely different. One lives between life and death while the other not only lives in a hotel, but the best one as well. The rank between the speaker and the solders contributes to this dichotomy, in which only the authority figure have the power to send soldiers to the war. Thus, it is the generals or any soldiers of a high ranking who live in the best hotel while the soldiers try to survive. The juxtaposition of the extreme situations of ordinary solders and privileged general highlight inequality within the army.  

   Toward the end of the poem, another difference between the soldiers and the general arises again. The speaker states, “When the war is done and youth stone dead,/ I’d toddle safely home and die-in bed” (9-10). The speaker utilizes forms of die to emphasize the various interpretation of death. Dead is used as an adjective to describe the death of the soldier in the war while the speakers utilizes die to describe the generals’ current action. What makes the “death” more different is the location of their death. The soldiers died in the war with wounds. On the other hand, the generals die in their cozy bed. Not to mention that the authority figures toddle to their homes, walking casually, instead of walking home with worries about the war. The juxtaposition, along with diction represents the speaker’s attitude toward warfare.



        Moreover, the speaker’s attitude intensifies at the end of the poem, in which he states,” Yes, we’ve lost heavily in this last scrap” (8) Yes what? Why we? The speaker utilizes “we” to emphasize the combined effort with the soldiers in the war that he did not directly participate. What is lost anyways? The manpower that was manipulated by the privileged generals or the war overall? The speaker’s sarcastic tone reflects his attitude on the topic-abhor by the privileged generals who enjoy the best hotel while the soldiers are fighting for glory and their lives.

       Throughout the poems, the speaker contrasts both subjects to highlight and criticize the unequal treatments and outcomes of a privileged general and ordinary soldiers. Nevertheless, laziness will always remain in humanity, as well as social class. In our society, many of the privileged people are similar to the generals who in the poem and are often exempt from laborious jobs while many of the commoners will share a similar experience with the soldiers who were sent to the line of death. For now, I am still lucky!



4 comments:

  1. I absolutely loved your opening! Rather than jump right into the text, which can seem rather boring at first, you grab your audience's attention with a very thought provoking introduction that transitioned seamlessly into your body. We made many of the same observations about the poem which certainly made your points easier to understand and relatable. The rhetorical questions you ask towards the end prompt the reader to ask questions that led right into your next point. It is also great that you tie everything back to your introduction at the end. The use of juxtaposition had never occurred to me while reading this poem. It certainly is at the heart of his purpose to compare the life of a man in power versus that of an ordinary soldier.

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  2. When I first read the title of your blog my reaction towards it was, "I wonder how she's going to connect luck with the poem." Upon reading it I said to myself wow she's so clever. I loved reading your blog post. You delve deeper into the poem in your analysis than I expected. I did not realize the juxtaposition the author used to illuminate his attitude until you analyzed it. You did a great job of engaging the reader into your post with your key points. The way your opening statement and closing statement connected was very efficient and was a good way to wrap up all your points. I liked how you focused on one poetic device rather than multiple devices, keeps the reader focused on one thing without easily getting confused. Good job!

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  3. I really enjoyed your hook! It was insightful and I was left wondering how you were going to draw a true connection to the poem itself, but you did a great job with that! I liked the analysis of juxtaposition. I had not considered that literary device when I was reading; I just thought of compare and contrast. You also analyzed loaded language too (throwback to AP Lang and Comp) which was nice. Theoretically, we could spend an entire day discussing Sassoon's diction and word choice and all the connotations they words evoke. Your blog post is well organized and easy to follow by tackling one idea in each paragraph. It made your writing less dense and more manageable to take on. I also liked the connections back to your hook at the end. It let your blog post come full circle and very satisfying and conclusive. I wish you had connected the "There is no 'we' in 'food'" image to the poem or something because I felt like I was left to make the connections on my own and figure out why you included the image by myself too. Like Anthony, I liked the use of rhetorical questions. They allowed you to direct your readers thoughts to where you wanted them to go. Great job on this post!

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  4. Girl, I really enjoyed reading your blog post. I loved your opening. When I began reading I was wondering if I was reading the wrong post! I could relate to what you are saying in the beginning of your blog. I myself greatly struggle with appreciating what I have. I have struggled with a lot of things in my life and I felt like I was the most unlucky person in the world. Then I realized that my "problems" may not be "problems". I try to live my life knowing that there is always someone in the world who would want to be in my shoes. On that note I'll move on to the poem. When you first said that Sassoon used juxtaposition, a light bulb went off in my head. I did not realize it at first, but when I actually thought about it I figured out how Sassoon incorporated juxtaposition in the poem. I also loved your explanations. I loved how you did not over-do the evidence. I honestly felt as though I was reading for pleasure (which I was). Good Job girl!

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